Date: March 25 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Not sure how a sword can go into his neck a few inches and he still survives; because a few inches is a lot. My own neck (and I measured it, how sad am I) is a mere 4 inches to put things into perpective. Just thought that was a little odd. However, I'm heading straight to the next chapter. Reading this makes me want to start submitting updates to stories of my own again. I'm not sure why I stopped...
Author's Response:
Haha, I guess I should have been more specific and said 1.5 inches, or some thin like that! It's definitely not 3 or 4 inches, lol. But he didn't live long afterwards, so the wound was fatal.
Date: March 15 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, supporting characters are dropping like flies! Let's hope Prince Alban has a change of heart soon since we seem to be losing his more likeable sidekicks. Still enjoying the story though, regardless of that.
Author's Response:
Heh, sorry if I killed off your favourite characters, lol! But, like i've said, this will be a long story, and there's a lot that's still going to happen, so hopefully it'll all turn out all right.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
awesome ending to this chapter although its very sad an unfortunate that shardon had to die... but he died with honor an dignity. beautifully written. ill be cheering her on in the chapters to come.
aaron
ps is two hundred thousand in gold alot to them.. tou didnt really say.
Author's Response:
Yup, it's a lot of money, more than most wealthy people would be able to have. (In my story, anyway, lol)