[Report This]Date: January 23 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
What is evy gonna do to roxy... Better yet will evy even find out... Great chapter, awaiting the next stellar chapter.
Aaron
[Report This]Date: January 22 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit... Its on now.
Poor jack. Roxy probably likes even more than evy... An jacks on a world of hurt.
Aaron.
Ps the progression of the story is great.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yes. Yes.
More. More.
Bravo!
Author's Response: Oh there will be more. Check back tomorrow, I'll probably have the new chapter by then.
Date: January 22 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is getting better and better. I love the cliffhanger at the end.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 22 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Finally he remembers. ^^
[Report This]Date: January 21 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
spectacular chapters. love this story even more. well done.
cant wait to see where you take this
aaron
ps loved the foot/toe scenes
Author's Response: I'll be putting more effort into planned foot/toe scenes in the future. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ah! Such bosom buddies.*
*Sorry; couldn't resist!
:-D
Date: January 21 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is pretty good so far.
Author's Response: Sweet! I've been working pretty hard on it lately.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
This last chapter was the best thus far. She really got off on her "fetish". And she seemed to lose control of herself. Even though she promised not to, I'd like to see her continue to lose control and become harsher and harsher with little Jack.
[Report This]Date: January 21 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ah! Now, the other shoe drops. Evy's going to be a semi-domineering type.
But, I don't think her boyfriend gives a Jack. ;-)
Author's Response: Check back in a few, I should have the next chapter up today. Making good progress :)
[Report This]Date: January 21 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
So far/so good, for the lovebirds.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is getting to be more and more like a sitcom. "Coming soon on FIDELITY DEATH MATCH: Evelyn v. Roxanne!"
;-D
Author's Response:
Maybe. You'll have to read and find out...
Date: January 20 2011 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Still hooked. :) And I like Evy's warm and loving flavor of domination.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2011 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Slow female growth instead of slow male shrinkage? Even more unexpected.
Brilliant! :-)
[Report This]Date: January 20 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ah! He's a closet macrophile, after all, huh? Nice twist, the way you delayed revealing that.
Author's Response: I figured, like a good chunk of us, that he wouldn't want to talk about it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2011 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmmmmmmmm! Sounds like she was dumped by someone who found her too control-freakish. Suitably ominous foreshadowing.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2011 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
The proverbial calm before the storm.
Now, I'm off to chapter 2.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
great job, i feel like this story could last awhile(at least i hope it does)
aaron
ps is there going to be any shrinking or feet?
Author's Response:
Shrinking and feet is in the works, for sure. Thank you kindly for the review.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
great start... dont know where your headed but i like the direction.