Reviewer: soniti54 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 51

Captivating story from the start. So much so that I practically starting making notes early on in preperation for the review, and due to my laziness, will be presented as such hah.

Excellent arguements supporting character beliefs, views and justifying actions.

Thrilling episodes, there's little I find more thrilling than some contagious blood thirsty zombies.

English isn't the official extraterrestrial language.

Fisc is a super cool guy.

Intense physical and emotional conflicts as well as complicated romance. Runo wasn't so much a bad kind of guy as he was the wrong kind of guy. I found this impactful because an antagonistic character does not always have to be a "bad" person, and I like that it's debatable who had really wronged who in the relationship.

Richard's hometown is in virginia, he's my homie.

Poor Will, bet he posted on fmylife.com after Ch30.

Crab's personality is epic.

Kikata deleting her messages to Richard in Ch43, god how I know that awkward feeling lol

The psychological aspect of chapter 39 felt off, considering that in a dream it's typical to either believe it's 100% figment of your imagination or 100% reality, it's hard to mentally convince someone that you're a small x% of reality within their dominating x% of imagination. It felt like there was a bit of a skip over the struggle and frustration Richard may have faced and the disbelief and denial of Kikata. I also imagined she'd have felt much more self-conscious, or coping with such, after accepting Richard's explanation, unless she really, REALLY had absolutely nothing to hide... Maybe it's just me, I have lots to hide... "Don't read that book! Put down that map! Don't you dare open that door!!" c:

It's very clear a lot of effort was put into this story and it's amazing! I'm surprised it doesn't have more attention and ashamed I didn't find it sooner!