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Reviewer: littlemac Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

good story so far

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

Damn. This Jessica be a harsh mistress.. But I can't help but think that there's more to Jessica than meets the eye. Can't wait to see how you incorporate her sister into this tale.
At any rate, great chapter an I'm looking forward to more.

Aaron

Author's Response: Oh, she's not that harsh, compared to some other 'mistresses' on this site, that is ;)

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