Reviews For A Son's Demise
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Reviewer: nevermore Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2018 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

a story about a mother that murders her son is just sick if you like writing stuff like this there's something wrong 

Reviewer: hill806 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

i meant kills then both not kiss lol

Reviewer: hill806 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

omg to me that was the best story i have read in along time and i diddnt want it to end. fantastic work, i loved how his mum  turned from this fantastic caring sweet mother into this menacing evil unemotional woman who tortured him in amazing brutal ways. I couldnt help feeling really sorry for timmy though.  i would love to see  you do 2 sequals to this, the 1st sequal would be where she does the same thing to the guy shes getting with. Also he could be a player and is secretly married with a teenage son tht reminds her of timmy so she tortures him too and eventually kiss them both. The 2nd sequal i would like to see is say 10 years in the future where she regrets killing timmy as shes to old to have kids and finds a way to go back in time to save her son from herself, perhaps before the 3 years she tortured him or maybe a week before she killed him. would be nice to maybe see timmy get rescued. lol please dont stop writing the best story, i think it could be a great series ;)

Reviewer: Eddy Cobb Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2009 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

This was a pretty good story. I really liked the way Jane slowly excepted and then rellished in her tiny son's fate.

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