[Report This]Date: December 15 2010 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad it had a happy ending. Might read another story of yours when I have a bit of time.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments and the ratings. I know parts were a bit rushed, this was my first time attempting a story that was more than just a few chapters long. I have a more recent story thats 22 chapters long, with less gaps in time.
Date: December 15 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think Alcia and Mike were a little hasty but I don't mind
I didn't think they had a home to go to though. This should be interesting.
Date: December 15 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
It's a little annoying how you keep missing bit out to quickly take the story further. I was hoping for more detail but I can live with it.
Date: December 15 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was so sad. Why did his dad have to die?
Date: December 15 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
How could part of the boat end up there? Dam, I need to read on.
Date: December 15 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting. Humans can be so foul...
Date: December 15 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to meet this goddess. I wouldn't trust a naga however.
[Report This]Date: December 15 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
You suddenly mention the name Alicia and I have no clue who she is until reading further. Other than that I am enjoying the story.
Date: December 15 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is quite good. I am enticed to read more. you do mention the name Vincent before he introduces himself and I found it a ibt confusing. Just a minor detail because I know you know but as a reader I need soem explaination.
Date: November 13 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
This was such a great story I enjoyed it very much and I absolutly hope you make another one with the three in it soon^^
Author's Response: *blushes* thanks ><...so far there has been 1 side story...I thought I uploaded it here but it hasn't popped up yet. anyway I can give you the dA link: http://ginbug.deviantart.com/#/d32o5eq and you can expect more to come...perhaps even another multi chapter journey.
Date: November 12 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Nicely detailed, adventurous story. Would love to see it through.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it so far, the rest is up now. Sorry it took long but I was making some slight changes, mostly spelling and grammar fixes, as well as a few artistic changes (it was previously on deviant art)
[Report This]Date: November 12 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
glad to see you put this on here. its probably my favorite story.
great work my friend.
aaron(cayce-fan)