Date: October 28 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Clash of the Urtykes
Interesting fantasy world you've created here. Various sized giantesses fighting a war for their miniature warlords. Apologies if I mised this detail but why are only women transformed into giants (aside from the obvious out-of-story reason)?
Author's Response: You'll find out before the story is over, but there is a reason. I just havent elaborated on it yet in the story :)
[Report This]Date: October 27 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Clash of the Urtykes
This has the makings of Epicness dude. Really enjoying it. Can't really think of anything to critisize at this point....oh wait what are the Pegusi exactly or did I skip over while reading?? Hope you don't just go on and leave this story in purgatory though...uumm I think I've written enough...
O_o
Author's Response:
Pegusi are pretty much what you'd expect them to be. There will be some inventions in the story you will have to make inferrences on, but there shouldn't be too many of those. Glad you liked it so much :)
Date: October 26 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Clash of the Urtykes
This story has potential to be a wonderful favorite.I like the idea of three basic sizes of giantesses.We hope to read about a Paragon soon and how Tuest will combat such a huge foe.Please continue to keep up the good work with many chapters-thanks.
Author's Response: There will definitely be some paragon action in the near future. Hopefully I can write the rest of the story well enough to live up to the potential you mentioned :) Thank you for the review, reading then really is a rewarding part of writing.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Clash of the Urtykes
wow... i really cannot bring into words how moved i am by this story. i absolutely love everything about it. hopefully you will continue this awesome tale soon.
aaron
ps have you written on this site before(by another name, of course)?
i am fav-ing this masterpiece.
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments. I am really glad you like it as I wasn't exactly sure if this writing style was worth trying over a simpler one for this audience. This is the only penname I have used to write giantess fiction, but this is also the first time I have ever put any serious effort into a story. I hope to be able to post chapter 2 by Sunday and the goal is to post on a weekly basis from there.