[Report This]Date: October 17 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
WTF this was started in 2010 how did I miss this gem? Hope I don't have to wait 2yrs for more chapters lol now im said.Still great story hope u continue soon.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I've been a bit slow with this story, but I didn't want to rush it. I've been stuck from time to time, not really knowing how I want to continue, so it takes time.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man, dr_joe, this is without a doubt one of my favorite GTS/SW stories. It would be awesome if you could finish it, or least show us if Rachel and August are reunited. Fantastic job so far!
I personally mostly prefer GTS, but combining it with SW is a match made in Heaven!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the direction this story is going. I can't wait for the next addition :)
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what direction I'm taking it while I write, but I'm glad someone appreciates it ;)
Date: February 19 2011 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am really enjoying this story. I love the direction you have taken the fairy mythos.
I hope you plan to continue this soon. I look forward to seeing what August thinks of Rachel's request.
Author's Response: It means a great deal to hear that people like what I came up with =) I have some plans for things to come, but I haven't really nailed it yet. When I do though, it's going online pretty damn fast ;) Hope you're patient
Date: November 05 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry, but I'm just not used to your method of presenting dialogue. I'm more used to quotation marks so I can tell when the dialogue part ends and the exposition part resumes. It's too tedious to have to separate it out myself.
Author's Response: I've been meaning to fix that for ages, but old habits die hard. Thank you for pointing it out and I'll see if I can get myself together =^_^=
[Report This]Date: October 28 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. I am a fan of gentle sw stuff, so now I'm curious to what Rachel will do now.
Author's Response:
It's nice to know that my story has fans! I've started on the next chapter, but it might take some time to finish because of... well... life... But I'll keep writing as soon as I get the time
[Report This]Date: October 25 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
thought this story was wonderful... and gentle.
aaron
can august shrink rachel? or fly?
Author's Response: I belive I will be adressing both those points in the future ;) Thank you for sharing your thougts
Date: October 24 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story; I think it is worth continuing. Not sure where you can go from here though. That makes it interesting.
I like how the Rachel's thoughts were being described. Also, fairies are fun. I didn't catch a too much of a description of either girl such as hair color, breast size, clothing detail. I may have missed it though.
Author's Response: Actually, you didn't miss it, I kind of left those parts out on purpose as an experiment. Hope it didn't get to confusing or boring