[Report This]Date: October 17 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
WTF this was started in 2010 how did I miss this gem? Hope I don't have to wait 2yrs for more chapters lol now im said.Still great story hope u continue soon.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I've been a bit slow with this story, but I didn't want to rush it. I've been stuck from time to time, not really knowing how I want to continue, so it takes time.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just read all this in one sitting and wow!!!!!! LOVE IT:) I hate reading great stories while their in progress lol.This is by far the best story I have read involving faries and shrinking.I love the characters and the past connection between rachel and august. Great now im going to have to wait for next ch.:( LOL. again fantastic story!
[Report This]Date: October 13 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man, dr_joe, this is without a doubt one of my favorite GTS/SW stories. It would be awesome if you could finish it, or least show us if Rachel and August are reunited. Fantastic job so far!
I personally mostly prefer GTS, but combining it with SW is a match made in Heaven!
[Report This]Date: June 02 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad you're still writing this story, it's not often that a story holds my attention like this one. I hope August and Rachel find each other in the end, though. (yeah, I love happy endings =)
Author's Response:
I'm really sorry it took so long but I really painted myself into a corner with this story, so I decided to try something weird for chapter 10... Hope I still keep your interest up =)
[Report This]Date: May 28 2011 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
poor august must be going crazy.
an what a surprising turn of events. im really loving this story even more now. well done. an the totem's speaking to creatures this is really cool. hope to read more about these characters.
aaron
Author's Response:
Oh I hope to read more about them as well =) I just need some inspiration to get me going again
[Report This]Date: May 08 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
interesting an very informative chapter. well done. hope to see more.
aaron
ps what is a totem?
Author's Response:
Informative? I felt it gave more questions than answers myself =)
Oh, I'm coming to what a totem is ;) I'm done with school soon so I hope to be able to post more within a month
Date: March 20 2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well, all I can say is I hope you write the next chapter soon, because I can literally not wait to find out what'll happen. This story suddenly got much more interesting
PS Are they speaking one of the Scandinavian languages? Just asking.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and good catch on the language... or languages. It's kind of a made up mix of them.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
what an interesting chapter... it leaves me with more questions.
but i like where its going, so far.
aaron
Author's Response:
Let's hope I can keep you interested then =)
[Report This]Date: March 18 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
holy crap... that is a awesome cliffhanger.
an the chapter was excellent as well.
aaron
[Report This]Date: March 06 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really love this story, it's amazing. I love the fantasy aspect, but the charcters are also very realistic, and their relationship certainly feels extremely special. Thanks for writing this, hope you continue it! =)
Author's Response:
I sure hope I can keep that special feeling =) I can with some certainty say that I will squeeze this story for a few more chapters =)
[Report This]Date: February 28 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the direction this story is going. I can't wait for the next addition :)
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what direction I'm taking it while I write, but I'm glad someone appreciates it ;)
[Report This]Date: February 27 2011 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
im really enjoying this story. love these two characters. an the 'modern' fairy idea is awesome, as well as the shrinking an well all her powers actually.
hope to read more of this tale.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I just hope I'm not stepping on too many toes rewriting what fairys are... But as long as I don't make them sparkle, I think I'm safe ;)
Date: February 19 2011 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am really enjoying this story. I love the direction you have taken the fairy mythos.
I hope you plan to continue this soon. I look forward to seeing what August thinks of Rachel's request.
Author's Response: It means a great deal to hear that people like what I came up with =) I have some plans for things to come, but I haven't really nailed it yet. When I do though, it's going online pretty damn fast ;) Hope you're patient
[Report This]Date: November 06 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
really great an the twists youve added to the 'fairy' thing were great.
love the begining, middle, and end.
really interested and waiting for more
aaron
Author's Response: Thank you. I try to make something different, and I really hope I'm not stepping on anyones toes when I try to portrait a slightly modern fairy.
Date: November 05 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry, but I'm just not used to your method of presenting dialogue. I'm more used to quotation marks so I can tell when the dialogue part ends and the exposition part resumes. It's too tedious to have to separate it out myself.
Author's Response: I've been meaning to fix that for ages, but old habits die hard. Thank you for pointing it out and I'll see if I can get myself together =^_^=
[Report This]Date: October 28 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. I am a fan of gentle sw stuff, so now I'm curious to what Rachel will do now.
Author's Response:
It's nice to know that my story has fans! I've started on the next chapter, but it might take some time to finish because of... well... life... But I'll keep writing as soon as I get the time
[Report This]Date: October 25 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
thought this story was wonderful... and gentle.
aaron
can august shrink rachel? or fly?
Author's Response: I belive I will be adressing both those points in the future ;) Thank you for sharing your thougts
Date: October 24 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story; I think it is worth continuing. Not sure where you can go from here though. That makes it interesting.
I like how the Rachel's thoughts were being described. Also, fairies are fun. I didn't catch a too much of a description of either girl such as hair color, breast size, clothing detail. I may have missed it though.
Author's Response: Actually, you didn't miss it, I kind of left those parts out on purpose as an experiment. Hope it didn't get to confusing or boring