Reviews For Shrinking Sadness
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ok now I'm not sure what to believe. If Kate perhaps eats like a pig then maybe she is fat after all? But I can't be sure. You haven't actually provided that much description, though I am liking the story so far.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2010 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

The pace so far is outstanding, the details an the descriptions are pretty good. But where this story shines for me at least, is the sweet gentleness an caring nature of the girl.
Gonna read ch 3 soon.

Aaron

Ps the story flows beautifully as well. Great job.

Reviewer: Malaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is great stuff, it seems we're into the same kind of thing, lol! Thanks, hope there will be more soon :)

Reviewer: pseudoaddiction7 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

This is a good read for me so far. We must be on the same wavelength somehow. :)

I can't put my finger on it. I like the story and I will continue to read it as it comes out. I don't have any constructive criticism; I don't feel like criticizing you for some reason. I won't offer any suggestions either; you do your own thing.

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