[Report This]Date: November 09 2010 6:48 PM Title: Part 1
Why not? Besides that seems to be all I give out these days.
Author's Response: Well, it's just that I understand that you're very thoughtful and considerate with your reviews of peoples' work on this site. You usually make star ratings pinpoint down to the half-star; I know because you gave my first story 4 stars when I originally started posting chapters. So, I know that when I get 5 stars from you, it's meaningful. :)
Date: November 04 2010 9:14 PM Title: Part 1
Good Idea but what you should of added is more High Heels!! like when the guy was passing the girls foot under the desk, she accidently bumbs him and he is stuck to her toe from the nail polish and he goes through a night in her heels :)
Author's Response: Ya, the time for adding stuff like that has come and gone (for more details see parts 2 and 3). From here on out, I'd like to resolve the primary situation and get everybody on with their own lives; they have feelings, too.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2010 6:02 PM Title: Part 1
great story so far. it would be better if it was socked giantess but its okay
[Report This]Date: October 11 2010 2:55 PM Title: Part 1
Great opening chapter! Your descriptive powers were such that, for some reason, I mentally pictured the premiere episode of an anime series!!
I also liked the name of Andy's partner-in-crime (as I'm sure a certain Mr. Williams will, too). Since they evidently have a foot-fetish, would this make them "pedi-criminals?"
Author's Response:
Heh, 'pedi-criminals'.
Thanks for the review Cary.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2010 4:52 AM Title: Part 1
Hah, a pretty good start! Now, let's hope the girls give them lots and lots of really intense "views" of the bottoms of their naked feet! XD
Looking forward to lots more from you, Addiction! :D
Author's Response: Thanks Canaan, I know I got a big order to fill now, I'm just hoping I make it good!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2010 11:48 PM Title: Part 1
you seem to have a lotta sentence fragments and blah, blah, blah. personelly i dont give a crap about punctuation as long as the story flows and kinda sorta makes sense(well spelling for some reason is important to me)
that being said i would appreciate a little more character development and i wish that the overall direction was better than two guys shrinking themselves to spy on hot women, which is why i love how you've made it seem like the women planned the whole thing. well done.
the foot/toe scenes where inspired. only thing i would have emitted is that another girl would have a dark purple shade/color of nail polish.
damn i haven't given that long of a review in awhile. (this story really has potential)
aaron
ps if i was too 'preachy' i apologize.
Author's Response:
No, not too preachy. It's interesting that I'm made aware of some flaws now that I'm trying to put myself out there. All I can say in my defense is that this is kinda a 'pulp fiction' anyway, so some of the finer elements of plot design and character development may be missing.
As always I appreciate your consideration for my writing. Thanks aaron.