[Report This]Date: November 09 2010 6:48 PM Title: Part 1
Why not? Besides that seems to be all I give out these days.
Author's Response: Well, it's just that I understand that you're very thoughtful and considerate with your reviews of peoples' work on this site. You usually make star ratings pinpoint down to the half-star; I know because you gave my first story 4 stars when I originally started posting chapters. So, I know that when I get 5 stars from you, it's meaningful. :)
[Report This]Date: November 09 2010 3:06 PM Title: Part 5
(scratches his head as he types)
ill give you this, i wasnt expecting that. guess thats why i kinda liked it. plus it made me laugh.
aaron
ps waiting on your next 'story'
Author's Response:
"(scratches his head as he types)" = Lol. You sure I deserve a 5-star rating then?
[Report This]Date: November 09 2010 3:03 PM Title: Part 5
Moral of the story: "Stand by your Stan."
Seriously, though: that was a nice change of pace, the way they let the guys have a turn at them. And, then, let them leave alive. This is definitely going to be a cult classic!
Author's Response:
'This is definitely going to be a cult classic!' = :o
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 11:39 PM Title: Part 4
lol if only it were that easy.
but wish the girls were giant again
aaron
Author's Response:
It might be that easy :P
Yeah, I know this is 'giantessworld' (then again, maybe I don't) but I had a giantess moment or two in this story already. I like balancing things out like that; I'm just not going to add 'giant men' to the key terms.
I haven't started the next part yet, so I dunno what's going to happen next. Watching tv right now, anyhow. Gonna get started on part 5 tonight.
Thanks for the word, aaron!
Date: November 04 2010 9:14 PM Title: Part 1
Good Idea but what you should of added is more High Heels!! like when the guy was passing the girls foot under the desk, she accidently bumbs him and he is stuck to her toe from the nail polish and he goes through a night in her heels :)
Author's Response: Ya, the time for adding stuff like that has come and gone (for more details see parts 2 and 3). From here on out, I'd like to resolve the primary situation and get everybody on with their own lives; they have feelings, too.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2010 4:27 PM Title: Part 4
Refreshing role-reversal! :-)
Author's Response: Yay for role reversal ^^
[Report This]Date: October 27 2010 10:02 PM Title: Part 3
worth the wait my friend.
love the longer chapter. an the details/descriptions of the characters.
wonder what happens next to the little guys.
aaron
ps hope theres some toe painting....
Author's Response: Thanks aaron. I've already thought about pulling a 'Se7en' and try making the last thing so unexpected it blows your mind (because they haven't said what the third thing was yet) :P. This is an opportunity for me to do some character development too, mm. I do look forward to finishing this
[Report This]Date: October 27 2010 8:46 PM Title: Part 3
Looks she toned down the spell a little _too_ far.
Author's Response: Maybe. At least he wasn't squished, poor guy.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2010 8:36 PM Title: Part 2
interesting... although i completely forgot how tall they are because you didnt do a scale with them an raven's/bianca's feet. that being said, i still thing this is gonna be your best story. well done and keep it up.
aaron
Author's Response: Dang, I'm glad to hear you like it so far, aaron. I'll try my best to keep this going!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2010 6:41 PM Title: Part 2
I don't know if I should pity these two...or be jealous of them. ;-D
Author's Response: :D
[Report This]Date: October 11 2010 6:02 PM Title: Part 1
great story so far. it would be better if it was socked giantess but its okay
[Report This]Date: October 11 2010 2:55 PM Title: Part 1
Great opening chapter! Your descriptive powers were such that, for some reason, I mentally pictured the premiere episode of an anime series!!
I also liked the name of Andy's partner-in-crime (as I'm sure a certain Mr. Williams will, too). Since they evidently have a foot-fetish, would this make them "pedi-criminals?"
Author's Response:
Heh, 'pedi-criminals'.
Thanks for the review Cary.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2010 4:52 AM Title: Part 1
Hah, a pretty good start! Now, let's hope the girls give them lots and lots of really intense "views" of the bottoms of their naked feet! XD
Looking forward to lots more from you, Addiction! :D
Author's Response: Thanks Canaan, I know I got a big order to fill now, I'm just hoping I make it good!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2010 11:48 PM Title: Part 1
you seem to have a lotta sentence fragments and blah, blah, blah. personelly i dont give a crap about punctuation as long as the story flows and kinda sorta makes sense(well spelling for some reason is important to me)
that being said i would appreciate a little more character development and i wish that the overall direction was better than two guys shrinking themselves to spy on hot women, which is why i love how you've made it seem like the women planned the whole thing. well done.
the foot/toe scenes where inspired. only thing i would have emitted is that another girl would have a dark purple shade/color of nail polish.
damn i haven't given that long of a review in awhile. (this story really has potential)
aaron
ps if i was too 'preachy' i apologize.
Author's Response:
No, not too preachy. It's interesting that I'm made aware of some flaws now that I'm trying to put myself out there. All I can say in my defense is that this is kinda a 'pulp fiction' anyway, so some of the finer elements of plot design and character development may be missing.
As always I appreciate your consideration for my writing. Thanks aaron.