wow... thats awesome. great. the vocabulary was 'big'. lol

but in all seriousness, the whole concepy of this story was spectacular. btw what DA picture/drawing is this from/who did it.
and your descriptions and details are second to none.

its my favorite short story.

aaron
ps are you taking request?

Author's Response:

yeah, vocab-wise i felt like taking a shakespearean angle if that makes any sense, and i'm glad you liked the descriptions; that was something i thought my last story was lacking

the pic was 'A Sensual Visit' by MostlyFunStuff (just a wonderful FF artist). just search 'a sensual visit' it should the first one that comes up, its a color illustration

as for requests, y'know, i'll hear your ideas but i can't guarantee that i'll get something done about it any time soon (then again, maybe i will). i'm out of ideas now, so if it's good i might just do i

thnx for the review and the rating aaron, always welcome