[Report This]Date: October 09 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
interesting... hope edward will have somesort of 'memory loss'. because the thought of him getting to livia, would probably be more than i could bear. or he'd just get shrunken;p(two-inches sounds good, lol)
but seriously this story is shaping up quite nicely. and the direction your headed an the pace of this tale are remarkable. well done.
aaron
ps this aunt ruth woman intrigues me greatly, hope to read more of her.
Author's Response: Interesting...why does she intrigue you, I wonder? ;) Oh, and Edward won't get shrunken, but I'm sure he'll get something coming to him.
Date: October 09 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great story so far! Not sure what to expect and the flow of the story is good.
Oh man, a cliff hanger. Sounds like something awful is going to happen. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Hoping we get to see fairy world sometime :D
Author's Response: Thanks, great review! I'll try and write chapter 4 as fast as I can, but I'm afraid it'll still be a long wait, :)