[Report This]Date: September 21 2010 8:22 PM Title: Highschool
... well all that i could really ask for in this story is after josiah is delt with, would like for shantel and alec to tie the knot together. but of course with some awesome shrinking scenes and hopefully some foot an toes scenes thrown in for good measure, lol.
as for carly wonder if shell escape or if thats really carly...
ps would also like more of chelsea.
well thats my two cents bro, take it or leave it. peace
aaron
[Report This]Date: September 20 2010 12:21 PM Title: The short Chapter.
I hope Josiah gets _worse_ than jail. He deserves nothing less.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2010 12:16 PM Title: The short Chapter.
You've appeased me. Thank god that shantel is alive... This story was very fast paced and enjoyable. Well done. Now I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Aaron
Author's Response: Hopefully I'll get it to you soon. If there's anything you'd like to see feel free to let me know. Same goes for critique! :)
[Report This]Date: August 14 2010 10:16 AM Title: College
This is getting to be a latter-day epic! Shantel sends Carly to prison. Only for Josiah to avenge her by ambushing Shantel, at her normal size, and molesting her.
I can't even _begin_ to imagine what Alec is going to do to him, as pay-back!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2010 8:48 PM Title: Highschool
well let me just say that chapter two was great except for the ending... im afraid that the only thing that could bring it back(for me anyways) is if somehow someother girl took one of the changing pills/liquid and that the real shantel is safe and sound(well not safe because she's being held prisoner by josiah until carly gets out)
but thats just my theory which i desperately hope is true
any rate loved the shower scene with shantel and the overall light-heartedness of this tale
aaron
ps please please give this a happy ending :)
[Report This]Date: August 09 2010 8:52 AM Title: Highschool
A lovely story. Although, I'm a little disappointed poetic justice didn't visit Carly and Josiah!
Author's Response: They do in the next part, or they will, if I make part 2.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2010 1:45 AM Title: Highschool
Finished this tale... And its very good. Some things were a little 'huh', but all and all great story. Hope to read more about Alec and shamtel. Or Chelsea would be cool to read about. Loved the fact that he almost had a limitless supply of the shrinking potion.
Aaron
Ps couldn't wait for the sentences tobe fixed so I read the rest of the story from my phone.
Peace
[Report This]Date: August 08 2010 10:55 AM Title: Highschool
I wrote to be fast paced with little time for detail, enjoy it! Or don't, whivever you fancy most.