[Report This]Date: March 08 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great story! Very sexy and fun, please continue! I'm hoping to see some threesome fun between Natalie, Anna and Kim!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
The flashback with Kim and her brother was very well placed. Good background on Kim, filling in the gaps. I look forward to seeing where this goes, now that the three girls are more or less on the same page.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2011 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
Very good dialogue between the girls. It moves the plot along nicely, and I feel the girls are well represented.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2011 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very interesting development. It's so funny, all the girls with unspoken desires, the same desires, who have to learn to overcome them slowly. Guess there's no way to get around that.
Author's Response:
I'd love to hear your take on said desires =)
[Report This]Date: June 20 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story so far! Can't wait for chapter 3. You should also post in the Shrinking Woman Stories forum on www.giantesscity.com/forum
Author's Response:
Sorry, I keep loyal to one site. Want my works to be easy to find for anyone who might be interested... ;)
[Report This]Date: June 20 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Damn
Author's Response:
Don't I know it!
Date: August 15 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is looking really good so far. You do a good job conveying the story and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. The text was very readable and uses a good descriptive vocabulary. If you hadn't said English wasn't your first language, I probably wouldn't have guessed. The only thing I noticed on the first read through was that stomach doesn't have an e on the end. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Putting an "e" at the end of stomach seems to be a bad habit of mine. I try to get rid of it, but reading what I've written, I always find that extra "e". Thank you for pointing it out =)