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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 10:05 PM Title: Part one

Pretty good. You did a nice job with all the Ghostbusters jargon, and the micro adventure. The idea of different chapters of the company in different cities is clever. A few typos here and there but a very enjoyable story.

Reviewer: Knot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 12:26 AM Title: Part one

One of my very, very favorites from forever ago. So cool to see you updating and re-posting, I always considered this a perfect blend of two of my favorite things. Perhaps there are more stories in you? Well, I guess I'll just hope.

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