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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2010 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 3: Malfunction

If I had to describe this cliff-hanger in one word? EXCELLENT!

P.S.---My compliments on the subtlety of your pun. I just got it. "Knot Rated R" (lol)!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3: Malfunction

knot greatbuild up... love the plot and detail you've giving us thus far. please dont skimp on them when the interactions with everyone being shrunk happens.
well anyways, this story is such a pleasure to read that i cant wait for more and where you take it... i just hope that kyra or his daughter heard or felt the immense energy emitting from the 'machine'...

ps 1/10 of there height... so does that mean just over half an inch?

aaron

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