Giantess World
Reviews For Malfunction
Reviewer: aaron Signed 
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Date: July 13 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
[Report This]Date: July 13 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
I agree with Cary. Only hope that there is more of her pretty toes. And the mom as well.
Aaron
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
[Report This]Date: July 13 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
Uh-oh! That's all a rule breaker like Kyra needs as encouragement; to be told NOT to go somewhere or do something.*
*Reviewer shakes head in pity.
Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: Success
Date: June 26 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: Success
interesting start
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
[Report This]Date: June 24 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Success
Wow. I'm thinking that you know a little bit about plot and character development. Lol. This story is going to be great I can feel it. Love that you've added the toenail color for kyra's toes. Hope there is more to come.
Also hope that you don't rush this story for it has the potential to be great.
Aaron
Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Success
Date: June 24 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Success
Really good start for this story. Looking forward to the sequels !