Reviewer: carnaj2 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2011 4:11 PM Title: Holographic Hurt (Part III)

Another great story Ace (or is that Jack?).  You write very well, free of mispelled words and grammatical errors that so often distract from other's stories.  Love the hologram idea too.  Nice to see something fresh in the way of a shrinking idea.  And of course your Mother/son stories are always fantastic.  I think my favorite was 'Mom's the World' but you never fail to deliver.  Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Ace, Jack, whatever! :) I've been trying to think of something new for these types of stories, at least to keep myself interested.