[Report This]Date: September 27 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. the characters, the plot and the snobby daughter taking over her parent's lives lol awesome! Will there be anymore to this story?
Author's Response:
Yeah, i have several chapters planned, i just got busy with life. I'm back to hopefully finish this.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh, thats what it looks like, lol. for some weird ridiculous(stupid) reason i thought that the crop hairstyle was like a crewcut... god i feel like such a jackass...
ps that is a very cute and attractive hairstyle(changes what i had originally thought of chelsea)
[Report This]Date: July 02 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am absolutely loving this story!! I'm always checking back for more! It flows so well, and the details are just enough to be able to put yourself in all of the characters positions. I literally cannot wait for more!! :o lol.
Great work! Keep it coming!!
Author's Response: I'm working on hard characterizations to try to maintain them to be accurate and consistent. I'm glad you are enjoying my meager story.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
This is becoming a fantastic read, i can't wait for more !!
Author's Response: Thanks PinkFemale
[Report This]Date: June 30 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
what a completely demoralizing and humiliating event for the two parents. especially samantha... cant help but feel extremely sorry for her. wonder if steven will give in to his daughter? will kathherine see the error of her ways only time will tell. great chapter cant wait for next installment.
aaron
Author's Response: I tried to work in the emotions they were feeling as I think that really is what makes the entire thing so humiliating that you can see directly how the characters are reacting to the situation. You can see how what is being done pains them on many levels.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
im actually starting to see things through katherine/chelsea perspective, which makes this story that much more realistic. thanks for posting it.
aaron
Date: June 25 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ps did you get the message I sent you?
Author's Response: i dont think so, try emailing it to me at invisibleink2011@gmail.com
[Report This]Date: June 25 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Only one question comes to mind, that is, does she want to just kill her tiny parents? Because I'm having a hard time not wanting Katherine to experience a similar fate. But I'm not there yet. Lol.
But at the same time part of me wants katherine's parents to be her personal playthings(as twisted as that is).
At any rate congratulations on another stellar chapter. Keep it coming.
Aaron
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments, she doesn't want them dead. She is just acting her age. She isn't really thinking about the consequences of her actions. She is just thinking about how she now has the upper hand, how she is enjoying extracting a bit of revenge. Like alot of younger people the full reality of a situation and how it effects more then just them directly doesn't always occur to them.
So its not Katherine is completely a heartless bitch, she is just young and dumb as many of us were in high school.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving where this is going. Highly intrigued at the Couples tag... so few authors willing to tackle such a task. You've inspired me to go back to work on my own story. Keep up the excellent work! I look forward to what's coming and extremely appreciate the quality of what's been written so far!
Author's Response: Thanks shadowcross. I'm flattered by the response. I figured the couples tag would scare people away so the reaction is quite surprising. Especially for my first work.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great story! I'm looking forward to seeing what she has planned for her parents.. those slippers of hers could come into play.. :)
Author's Response: Thanks william, and those slippers just might come into play at some point.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Definitely interested in seeing more!
Author's Response: Thanks Binary,
it is especially nice to hear that you are enjoying the story. As one of my personal favorite stories is one you never finished about a boyfriend and girlfriend who shrink themselves to fool around only to have the girlfriends sister return home.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is my favorite current story. You write very well, and the plot is building nicely. Anxiously awaiting further chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments on my writing and I'm glad you are enjoying the story. It is alot of fun to write.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
ooh, the plot thickens. great chapter.
just hope that katherine mearly toys with them and not eats/kills them. but even though the chapter is shorter i dont feel you lost anything. hope that you continue with this tale.
ps does katherine have painted toenails?
aaron
Author's Response: Thanks Aaron. This chapter is shorter because of the fact im writing to specific points. So sometimes it takes longer, sometimes not as long. Glad you are enjoying it.
As to if she has painted toe nails, sometimes.
Date: June 08 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice theme hope to hear more.
Author's Response: You will definitely hear more.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far! Unlike the previous reviewer I hope she's emo or goth ;)
Author's Response: Thanks weary traveler. I'm not totally sure what defines someone as emo, so i can't really say shes emo or not as i'm not sure what quantifies one as EMO.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
likewise, like where this is going. have a thought, is katherine an emo kid?(hope not but we'll see)
anyways, great dialog, and characters have a realism to them that i admire.
ps do will you take requests for this tale?
aaron
Author's Response: if you have idea's or things you want to see you can suggest them. I wont guarantee they will make it into the story. However, requesting or suggesting an idea definately cant hurt the odds of something getting in. I'm glad you like the characters. That is one thing i was working the hardest on.
Date: June 07 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start and I like where this is going! The father is a bit naive of the situation... poor guy doesn't realize his daughter may just do what she wants now that her parents can't do a thing about it.
Author's Response: Thanks, i was trying to establish real characters, the father is a bit naive he has that kind of ignorance is bliss attitude. I have feeling your premonition is going to come true.