Reviews For Parental Myrmidon
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Reviewer: blackguyj2009 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm turned off by the lack of someone, preferably the mother, being killed in this story. You can't get extreme violence with first person character, unless they are witnesssing another one getting kileld (preferably the mother at the hand of the daughter). I wish she would fart on her too.

Reviewer: mrcool Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

Awesome story!! please continue



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I try to do chapters as often as i can.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

I just read the 12 chapters in one sitting. What a fantastic story. I can't wait to see whats next



Author's Response:

Wow, thats quite a bit of reading in one shot. Thanks so much.

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