Reviews For First Love Part 2
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow chapter 6 presents an interesting twist. I really thought Alex was a goner.

Author's Response: Once agaian, sorry it took so long to respond. Glad you like these stories, there'll be another one, don't know when, though...

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow... What a delightfully addictive chapter. Who is it? Will the person help him?

Ps sorry bout the Nate thing, that's from another story on here.
Will Alex ever see Emily's sweet caring face again? Only time will tell. Great chapter.
Pps love the whole thing with the spirit girl, even though it was different it flowed well. Nice job.

Aaron

Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for the awesome review! Regarding Mary, I don't think I'll bring her back soon, since I want this to remain a love story, and not veer off into supernatural fantasy. But I hope the chapter works as well as I hoped it would!

PS Still anxiously awaiting your next chapter. I'm really curious now to see what happens.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 6

Masterfully poignant interlude! :-)

I can only hope, however, that the boots belong to one of Emily's friends.

Author's Response:

Great review, and I think you're right in your guess too!

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