Reviews For First Love Part 2
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Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

I was hoping the mother would take him home and eat him. Oh well, that's the stuff of my tales. Still enjoying yours.

Author's Response: Thanks, great review! As you've probably guessed, I'm not a vore fan, so you probably won't see anyone get eaten soon. At least, not in this story :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

Very believable, love how this tale is progressing. Can't help but think about poor Emily, and what she's going through. Also, has Diane realized anything is amiss?

Ps is Nate hope someone finds Nate, who gives him clothes, or a warm place to stay.

Aaron

Author's Response:

Uh, Nate??

Anyway, thanks for the review. I'm sure Diane has realized that he's gone by now, but there's nothing she can do about it. She should have guarded her prisoner more closely.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

Nice bit of "unaware-ness" (re: the little girl's mother).

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