Reviews For First Love Part 2
Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
Date: June 02 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
The quest is on. Love the fact that he's going to brave the perils of the outside. Great ending, keep thinking that his love for Emily must be the stuff dreams are made of, I know I would've submitted to Diane by now. Will emily's friends come into play now, only time will tell.
Ps the feet scenes are great. Hope you put in some more.
Aaron
Author's Response:
I would've submitted as well, but I think Alex's longing for Emily is strong enough to make him try and escape. At least, I hope it's convincing! Thanks for another great review!
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2010 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Date: June 01 2010 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
YES!!! Now, if only she lives in the same apartment building as Emily.
Author's Response: It would be a pretty short story if she did! But I am trying to get him back as soon as possible...