Reviews For First Love Part 2
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Reviewer: autiphilia Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 01 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is very well told overall, but I absolutely hate the way it ended.

An innocent person was kidnapped, imprisoned, berated, nearly mutilated, tortured and humilated, repeatedly threatened with death, and finally, violently raped. Then only a week later and the victim is actively seeking to forgive their abuser when they have shown no signs of remorse. Not only that but the victim says their abuser is, and I quote, "not evil" just because they were abused themselves. In the end the rapist still hasn't even appologised, and is said to be unlikely to ever do so, and yet the implication is they will get off scott free. The story even frames that in a positive light. Unbelieveable.

I assume this is because of the double standard against male rape vicitms, which is why I used gender neutral pronouns in the above paragraph, to help people see how frankly fucked up this is.

I swear there needs to be a rape category on this site. I've read less than a handful of stories so far and I've already read two that not only had rape scenes, from the victim's perspective even, but explicitly called it out as rape - in stories with the "Gentle" tag!

Reviewer: Arkcrono14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely love your stories always have been a lurker on this site but had to leave a review to me you're the best author on this site and love rereading your work from time to time

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love both of these stories dude. Any chance you might make a First Love Part 3?



Author's Response:

Not at the moment, I don't think. I'm not sure where I could take this story next, but I might write a similar story with different characters. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well, I didn't think the first one needed a sequel but you managed to make it work. And you did a superb job too! Malaka, you are in my opinion, the best writer on this site.



Author's Response:

I'm very honored, thank you! Reading new reviews for old stories is always a pleasure.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice start. Good to see you continuing with these characters and introducing a new threat. Definitely seems like Diane has been burned by men and wants to take it out on her new "toy."

Author's Response: Yeah, there's quite a lot I could tell about her character. Stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad this story's back, especially the last 2 paragraphs of this chapter.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. What an amazing start! My story will be a little while cause writing on this site is kinda frustrating. Well anyways I love the direction your headed with this awesome sequel.
Ps love the fact that your trying out something different with this one.

Aaron

Author's Response: Great to hear from you again!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Uh-oh! That sounded foreboding.

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