Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 6:43 PM Title: Epilogue Scene II - The Beach

wow.. awesome. really loved this chapter from beginning to end. remarkable job.

aaron
ps an i was hoping that carrie an david could get some marriage counseling(from someone with experience in their kind of relationship) again thanks for bringing this new aspect to this already superb epic tale.
pps hope that david will be able to either wake up carrie or find jerry for assistants with his wife...

well sorry to be rambling but i couldnt help it this story is very exceptional.

well done minuss!