Date: May 04 2012 8:08 PM Title: Episode X: Finders Keepers
minuss, great chapter.
Extremely happy with how this chapter turned out. Love how Jane an Jerry's relationship is progressing.(can't wait till it comes to a head) Also I'm very intrigued to see what will happen with(or if anything will happen) Brad an Becca. Loved kelly's reaction to stephanie's body. The ending left me only wanting more, just can't believe that Carrie didn't tell Stephanie about what happened to her with Kelly(or does she not want to give Stephanie any ideas)
At any rate I'm glad to see the story back(well any of your stories for that matter)
aaron
Ps just curious why is the chapter called 'finders keepers' (at first I thought it was gonna somehow involve Carrie, but guess I was wrong)
Author's Response:
Hi Aaron, thanks for the compliments. Its titled Finders Keepers to insinuate that since Stephanie (and Brad) found Carrie and David that she (they) can keep them.
minuss
Date: May 04 2012 7:52 AM Title: Episode X: Finders Keepers
Yeah... Carrie really should asked Becca to take her home if she was really concerned about her safety and then tried to run away if her intentions weren't truely genuine. Either way, Carrie and David must have the worst luck in the world. It seems impossible to find one nice Brobdingnagan that is not going to abuse them in someway. This may be a honeymoon they never want to remember XD
Date: May 04 2012 3:09 AM Title: Episode X: Finders Keepers
Well, Carrie and David are reuinted but they don't seem to be out of the woods yet. I wonder if Kelly and Becca are sticking around. Four Brobdingnagans (plus Jane if she returns) would certainly complicate things.