Date: March 15 2012 11:10 AM Title: Episode IX: Inner Space
Been thinking will that Brobdingnagian lawyer make an appearance in this story Jamie I believe her name was( from your story 'in over your head')
She could just be on vacation too with her new beau. Perhaps a guliveran. Would be sexy as hell if she became friends with either Jerry or Jane.
Anyways, I can't wait to see more an I love the direction this story is taking.
aaron
Ps will we ever see Debra's character again?
Author's Response:
This one is set about 10 years before In Over Your Head. Jamie could make an appearance, but if she does she would be much younger and probably an intern or clerk. As for Debra, anything is possible, but it would be hard for her to be brought in as she is in intensive therapy right now. It’s possible that someday her and Carrie will re-kindle their friendship (assuming Carrie survives her honeymoon), but for now it’s too soon after the incident with David. Thanks for your interest in all my stories.
minuss
[Report This]Date: February 28 2012 11:42 AM Title: Episode IX: Inner Space
amazing story, i can't wait for chapter 20, i've been on the edge of my seat through every chapter, keep up the good work
Date: February 13 2012 5:06 PM Title: Episode IX: Inner Space
Jane is really starting to piss me off. If she needs to regularly cheat on her husband to be physically satisfied, maybe she shouldn't have married a Gulliveran in the first place. And now she's tempted to step on him to end an argument? Even if it was just an idle thought that she'd never act on, it's pretty clear this is not a healthy marriage. Add to that the domineering brat of a stepdaughter and I think Jerry should get out of that relationship pronto -- for his own health.
Date: February 13 2012 7:49 AM Title: Episode IX: Inner Space
I'm sorry but I think I'm done with this story. I enjoyed that, if for a moment, it dealt with the complications of what would happen in a world with multi-sized people. Jerry felt semi-realistic with his reactions regarding his daughter and wife but now he's coming off as a push over. He has legitimate problems in his relationship and it seems its getting dashed under the rug. I still don't really like Stephanie and Jane is another story. I mean unless there is some big twist or something I feel this part of the story just had lost potential. Not much is happening either with David and Carrie besides them getting used as sex toys and being compared to sexual parts. I've seen this in dozens of gts stories so it's nothing new. In truth, I don't really like that the erotica bits are overshadowing what plot there is. Don't know if you care or not, but I did enjoy most of this story. David and Carrie are a cool couple.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2012 12:00 AM Title: Episode IX: Inner Space
Stellar chapter. An damn I really hate this Kelly chick. I mean she's probably not so bad but the fact that she is being mean to sweet Carrie is reason enough to dislike her very much(not that she's being 'mean' per se.. just forceful) hope Stephanie beats the crap outta her.
Anyways, love how you brought Jane back. An the fact that she fucked a guy with a guliverian wife was completely unexpected. Awesome job.
Love how Jerry brought up to how/when he feels Stephanie should move out. An I absolutely loved jane's reaction.
The parts with steph an brad were great but typical until she starts comparing the contact lins case david's in to her nipple an brads junk. Then she shoves him in her twat. Awesomeness.
Really like how the chapter ended too, with Carrie in Kelly all the way and having to hold her breath an pray becca helps her.
This is probably one of my favorite chapters to this story. Hope the next chapter begins with Jerry an Jane.
aaron (wish I could give it more than a perfect 10)
Ps can't believe jerry still hasn't gone sperlunking, yet.