Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2012 7:13 AM Title: Episode VII: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

I'm sure Stephanie is pretty close to the point of no return. Even if Jerry is her step father it has been implied that their relationship goes back more than a few years, giving them time to know each other well. The story just doesn't show the dynamics of their relationship as a whole since Minus is making it up as he goes along and probably didn't expect the epilogue to go on for this long. So from what we do know within the context of the story is that Jerry doesn't let his size be a detimentral factor in his relationship with his wife and step daughter, sometimes to a fault. He is stubborn, hardheaded, and controlling, but he loves his wife and cares about Stephanie's upbringing and seems to want her to be an honest individual. Now the problem is that the story paints Jane and Stephanie in a complete negative light with no redeeming factors. Jane is sexually disatisfied with her diminutive husband and cheats on him frequently to experience real pleasure from relatively normal sized men. She has a very hands off approach with dealing with problems in her family, which fustrates Jerry and is a negative infulence on Stephanie. Divorce is likely due to how strained their relationship appears. And finally, Stephanie is a selfish, self-absorbed, naive individual who doesn't like to own up to her actions and is very insensitive toward people. She has no respect for her step father and treats him as if he's less than a person. From the first chapter she is introduced in up until now as had her actions become more and more spiteful, all because some little people messed with her sex time with Brad and she may or may not have been the cause of a woman getting amnesia. It's not like she can take back the things after the day is done. What kind of relationship can she have with Jerry after this? Even if she wakes up and realizes she acted like a total child, they may never be close again, if they were even close at all. I just hope the resolution to this isn't a copout. I already feel like I put too much thought into this. Most GTS stories barely have a plot to begin with, so when real plot driven stories like this come around, I take 'em seriously.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2012 12:11 PM Title: Episode VII: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

its funny that jerry an jane maybe both contemplating a divorce but i dont think that stephanie will allow that to happen because she has become accustomed to a 'privileged lifestyle'
so what im thinking is that something drastic will have to happen for jane an jerry to separate or reconcile, but the only way for that to happen is for jane to put stephanie in her place(which i dont see happening)
an as far as this chapter goes great job. because i dont see stephanie as an overly mean/wicked person just naive an spoiled. which at her size can be a deadly combination. i can only hope that she will see jerry for who he is before its too late an there is no turning back. an as far as jane's apathy is concerned i really hope that she will again find that spark that caused her to fall for jerry. an i hope jerry in turn is willing to do more to please his wife..(maybe he should rent a wet suit an oxygen mask, im just saying that its not all her fault)

well anyways im glad to see this story back an cannot wait to see if kelly an becca will prove to be just curious about carrie's tiny size or dont care about her an shove her tiny body in their pussies' without any thought to her well being. an i cant believe she was so close to finding jane, but it seems that she was only thinking about some fun with this new guy(i migght be wrong about that)

aaron