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Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 35

Nice wrap up. Like what you did to Jerktor.

I'll say it again, I did enjoy this story.



Author's Response: Thank you. That is SO good to know! :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 34

Well that answerns the question of who came to their rescue.

Nice to see the good guys win.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 33

Wonder who this new friend is? Keep the chapthers comming.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 33

* S.E.T.H. (Sizeloans for the Ethical Treatment of Humans)

TASER: Tele-Active Shock Electro-muscular Response (I think).

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 32

Teleforce.

Boy it takes a genius to think this stuff up.

Author's Response: Much as I might wish otherwise, I can't take credit for the name. It's reportedly what the real-life Tesla wanted to call his "death-ray." The test-firing of which is supposedly the real source of the Tunguska Disaster of 1909.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 31

"Queen of the multiverse'? Talk about ego. Hope her plan goes up in smoke.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 32

You not kidding about pumping out the chapthers. Looks like the good guys really are running out of time.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 30

Hope the agents can defeat Jerktor. As for Deb and Ray, the bad guys just keep coming. Look forward to the next chapther.

Author's Response: Well, now that I no longer have IOBTFOS dead-ending me, I think I can churn out five more chapters for this epic* *Smiles at the thought of hundreds of groaning lurkers pulling out whole wads of cranial hair.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 29

Lot going on in this chapther. Go agents go. Hope Ray doesn't become lizard dinner.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 28

It's nice to have a mini goddess on your side. Hope Deborah can destroy the radear dish.

Author's Response: I hope so, too! ;-) Btw; sorry for taking so long to get back to the I.D.E.E.A. men. Writer's block, again! But, now that IOTBTFOS has served its purpose in eroding that, I think I can delete the latter and concentrate totally on the former.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 27

Good thing Deb can change size in a hurry. So general Michaelsen is a Morpher! Didn't see that coming.

Author's Response: I was originally going to make him a super-patriotic dupe. But, I changed my mind when I realized that was too close to one of D.X. Machina's dangling subplots (@ "The Transforming World" series). My apologies to the latter.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

Kill-bite clan? Does that means one bite will kill you?

Author's Response: Just about! But, it won't be a quick, painless death. That's what so frightening about that septic saliva.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 25

While I have seen a few twight zones. I don't recall that one.

I have a feeling Ms. Zavia Laryngea arrival means trouble for the good guys.



Author's Response: The episode was an anti-conformity fable about a dystopian future-Earth where everyone had surgically been altered to resemble each other...and wear form-fitting leotards.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 25

Re: "Number 12 Looks Just Like You."

How many of you remember that classic episode from THE TWILIGHT ZONE (guest-starring Suzy Parker and Richard Long)? Raise your hands. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 24

I wonder what this operation Teleforce is?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

* Nullaroo: my own portmanteau of "Nullarbor" ( a desert region traversing the border of Western and South Australia); and "jillaroo" (or Australian cowgirl...sort of).

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 23

Who knew that GTS-Goddess duels where so popular? I have a feeling that a room full of redheads is trouble.



Author's Response: They certainly seemed to have scared off Timescribe and D.X. Machina!* *Just kidding, guys. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 22

That's some plan.

Author's Response: I had to bring those previous long-winded expositions together, somehow! ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 21

Well he can sure handle secruity. But what's got him so worried?

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 20

Nice to see a new chapther.

But what's this about sizevamps shrinking GTS-Goddesses?

ps Hope Ray can handle sucurity.



Author's Response: Just read chapter 21 to find out.

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