Reviews For Out of the Woods
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Reviewer: WalterWrider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love the light stomp scene!!! I wish I could see more foot stuff like that whether it's like that or gentle. ^^

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

"but they stumble" should be stumbled as it's past tense. Second paragraph. At this moment I'm kind of expecting Billy to let the secret out but I'm going to see how things play out.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ha Billy got what was coming to him. On another note I hope Linda gets to become close friends with Susie, and Jake. Don't want anything bad to happen to Susie, so I can't wait to see where you go from here with this story.
Aaron

Author's Response: I've already got an ending in mind, which I hope will be a satisfying one. It'll definitely be a happy ending, and leave room for a sequel.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 6

Excellent update! Masterfully poignant.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's great to see my story appreciated like this.

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