Reviews For Hierarchy
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 1:48 PM Title: Sacrifice

The story is looking good and the relationship Kevin is developing with Keyaira is interesting and seems original although you've got capital letters in the middle of setences which is a bit wierd since they should only be at the start of setences.

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