Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2011 1:42 PM Title: Subserviance

It's a nice story although it seems strange how Kevin was in a field and all of a sudden he's somehwere else. It just seems like a big jump and how she found him could have been decribed a bit better. Still, I feel like I want to read the next chapter, so off I go.

Author's Response: All this will be explained in later chapters. If I elaborated on it all now I'd probably get lost in my story line. Sorry for any confusion and thanx for the review. They're always welcome :)