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Reviewer: Raiza Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2010 8:27 PM Title: The Party Continues and your Family is Unaware of your Presence (13)

Unsure what the random underlined words are for. Emphasis? Why not itallics?

Author's Response: i like to thik of it as MORE emphasis.  italics only when you hint at it.  underline is more obvious but severe.  and boldening it seems the most serious when it comes to emphasizing the words.   but i think i'm going to try to focus more on the italics and emboldening now

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 08 2010 9:51 PM Title: The Party Continues and your Family is Unaware of your Presence (13)

Well, I kept my promise concerning this chapter. But, the next chapter? That's starting to look a little uncertain.

Author's Response: thats okay, read as much or as little as you want to.

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