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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 10:25 AM Title: Your First Whiff of her Feet (3)

Hmmmm! I'll bet she snuck into his bedroom and asked him that question while he was still half-asleep. Thereby incorporating it into his dream.

Author's Response: Yep Exactly!  I kinda wanted the reader to figure it out for himself, so as to leave a little mystery to the story, and you nailed it.

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