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Reviewer: Serj1801 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2024 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Super! I hope to read your other stories when they appear. I remembered a collage that is quite suitable for illustrating this story.

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Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2024 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, I'm surprised it's your first! The relationship between Eleanor and her tiny is great and I love their dynamic. I especially like the butt insertion reveal, it came as a bit of a surprise but in the best way. I also liked the choice to keep the tiny nameless, it adds to the dynamic and makes it easier to project onto him. 

In short, I loved this one, and I look forward to seeing what you write next. If you're ever looking for a co-worker, feel free to hit me up on the discord. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It means a lot coming from a skilled writer like you. It was difficult deciding whether to keep the tiny nameless or not, so I'm glad that paid off. I know you've been looking for a co-writer, but honestly, with how slow and ineffective I am at writing I don't think I would be a good fit lol

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2024 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not bad for your first story really good job with details and pacing and character and world building like this was really good read hope to see more stories from you soon and also yes love butt insertion content…well butt content in general but overall great story 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I also hope I can upload more stories, although the next one probably won't have butt content.

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