Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2024 7:39 PM Title: Hailey Gives Dylan the Lowdown

JJ, I like the short story (would be better if it was continued to completion, though I understand you want us to imagine what will happen), but having his clothes shrink with him after he drank the shrinking formula???? Come now. He should have shrank into his clothing and been fished out nude.

Author's Response: Lol that's a fun idea!