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Reviewer: Bad Writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2024 1:42 AM Title: Intro

This story is amazing!


It's rare to find stories with a heavy focus on shoe exploration, and even more uncommon for them to be written so well.


I really hope you continue this one.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 12:38 PM Title: Testing the device

great writing. can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 1:14 AM Title: Testing the device

A very nice beginning, with plenty of well described desires and intents.  I'm looking forward to more of this story.

There is one question I have, especially considering all the detail you have stated thus far.  Chase seems to love and adore his wife Alexis, so why is it that he has an infinity for her sister Delaney's feet rather than Alexis'?  As Chase himself states, this could cause him his relationship with Alexis, so why choose Delaney?

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2024 11:54 PM Title: Intro

Nice one looking for the next chapter 

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2024 1:31 AM Title: Intro

very promising start, you should definitely continue.

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2024 1:17 AM Title: Intro

What a nice intro, you really need to continue this story 

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2024 6:06 PM Title: Intro

You should definitely continue it-he should be able to shrink down to, imho, half a millimeter and then enter the discarded flat. While her wife is in the toilet or sleeping. 

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