Date: February 17 2024 5:29 PM Title: Lunch Rush
Hope you conclude this one. Maybe she has a change of heart and keeps him where he is. After all, she's the more capable student and needs his energy to excel at school. It's for the best. Great story!
[Report This]Date: February 15 2024 10:26 PM Title: Lunch Rush
Such a fun story! Agree with the other reviewer that the twists kept me riveted through the whole thing. And safe vore is a underutilized genre, so fun to see it here.
Is there any continuation planned to this? It seemed like it could be the opening chapter in a wider story.
Author's Response: The story was written as a one-shot request, but I may continue it if people are interested. There are certainly some interesting directions that it could take.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2024 8:47 PM Title: Lunch Rush
This story is amazing! I was on the edge of my seat at every twist and turn, and I love the direction you took it. The details throughout are really vivid, constantly appealing to all five senses. Charlotte and her relationship to the protag are super cute, and Maya made for a great foil to that (I also dig Charlotte enjoying the swallow. It's always nice when the big's having fun, even in less ideal circumstances like these). Great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it. Typically, I try to write grand narratives, so when I focus on a relatively simple scenario like this one, it gives me opportunities for vivid descriptions.