Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2024 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a very fun story. I'd love to see a continuation of it. Maybe them lost on the sister's body. Or...maybe one of them shrinks even smaller?

Author's Response:

Thanks, it seems like them getting even smaller is a popular request. :')

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2024 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

The final chapter is excellent. The casual treatment, comparative disregard for the tinies' feelings and plight, the dehumanisation, the effortless dominance of their daughter and the sly sadism of the sister. I'd love to see further chapters like that, with a counts of the tiny couple being "cared for" in the clumsiest ways, sometimes ending up spending days as specks of dirt between their daughter's toes, or in the sister's discarded tissue, etc etc. someone else also talked about them getting smaller still, and that could be an exciting. Sitting on their daughter's stomach to watch TV could quicky degenerate into them being swept along by a drop of sweat and becoming trapped in her navel while she searches for them, or lost in the jungle of the sister's pubic hair.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the detailed review. These are all excellent ideas, definitely worth considering for future chapters.

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2024 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

I always love a good shrunken couple story and this is definitely a good one 

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad it met your taste!

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

love the story so far. Really liked that part early on where the daughter was trying on her moms bra and was proud that she outgrew her

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked that part

Reviewer: Freet Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

It got more interesting, and it left me with suspense.

Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

So they have u til the afternoon to pack up and get ready to go to the aunt's. I hope they end up in some situations before then.

Author's Response:

Hmm... we'll see in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Socalspeck Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2024 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I’m not going to rate yet because I want to see how the rest of the story goes. Really excited, great intro chapter! 

Author's Response:

Thanks, hope you will enjoy the rest of the story.