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Reviewer: Ijod Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2024 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 3: December 8, 2028- First Date

You're right, their chemistry is on point. I hope all ends well for them! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Sammy15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2024 7:57 PM Title: Prologue

I am enjoying this story. Sad now that I saw its only 4 chapters. It feels like it could go much longer. The world building is great. I like the miniature building the men live in. The speed dating is an interesting concept, good way to get kidnapped. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Unfortunately, this is a commission, so it's up to my client to determine how long they want the story to be. I could consider extending it after the four chapters, but that likely isn't in the cards. 

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