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Reviewer: thechair145 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2024 12:04 PM Title: A night out

any word on the update? really looking forward to it.



Author's Response:

I know this is late, but I took a break. Life stuff, essentially. I've now started writing the chapter and will try to post it this weekend. Thanks for the patience!

Reviewer: thechair145 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2024 8:26 PM Title: A night out

Very good beginning, can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words! Will probably be up soon, I'm working on it.

Reviewer: SamNorton Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2024 11:09 AM Title: A night out

Nice begining! I'm curious to see what will happen outside the casino

Just an information, if possible? How tall are the characters at the beginning?



Author's Response: Episode 2 is out and happens outside the casino, though it's a bit shorter. As for the heights I honestly didn't think about specific numbers, which looking back on it was a bit of a mistake. I'll think more about it, but I'd say Dylan is about 6'2, above average, Will is like 5'0, so pretty short, and the other two are somewhere in the middle, about the average human height of 5'9 to 5'4.

Reviewer: purplereader Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2024 7:52 PM Title: A night out

Interesting setting.


What makes me curious is how would their inreased sizes be used outside of the casino or if there are other ways to gain or lose size.


Let's see what happens to the four of them



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Next episode actually takes place outside the casino (will probably be uploaded very soon). I'm looking to explore a bit more of this world in the coming chapters. Thanks for reading!

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