[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
You are doing a great job with the pace of putting these great chapters out! Requests would be: being painted onto a toenail, trapped in the toilet, vacuuming/cleaning. All unaware.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had time off of work and tried to use it to get the ball rolling quickly, and your suggestions are noted and all very possible!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the story! I've been enjoying everything immensely so far, and I'm low-key very jealous of how quick you've managed to pump these chapters out haha.
I'm usually not too big a fan of the 'Carelessly cruel' type of interactions where the giants know they should be more careful/a little nicer, and just...aren't. I more often prefer pure unaware or someone being actively cruel instead, but I've been really enjoying it so far in this story. The Chen stuff is great like others have said, but I was honestly waiting for a scene like the movie viewing one where all the women thud their dirty feet up on the counter by Jake, and that scene delivered for me haha.
I usually don't make requests since I know authors have their own plans, but since you asked I'll throw in another vote for Jenna being the one sits on him and buries him beneath her butt. I've also fallen in love with Lizzy embarrassingly quickly (I could have read several more chapters of him being stuck in that shoe lol) and definitely hope that she can ask Skylar to borrow her 'Lucky pebble' again. Or at the very least cheer her up by making her think Jake loves her feet haha.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, the idea of a family member being so careless with their shrunken son/brother is a difficult sell and I try and back it up as much as I can with a hopefully rational or believable reason why they might act that way. I'm also glad you like Lizzy so much, she seems to be a fan favorite so she will definitely play a significant role! Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Dude you are killing it with this story is honestly surprising how quickly I got hooked into this story. I already love Lizzy character and Jake being determined to make it back to his family and the Chen story line is so good and I can’t wait to see what her plans are. Overall you are doing great
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews man! I'm glad you're enjoying! And I'll just say, no spoilers of course, that everything you've suggested is easily something I could fit in, if not already planned! So look forward to that!
[Report This]Date: December 31 2023 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Man this has been fantastic!! Love seeing the family go from people who were worried that every little thing could kill Jake, to being even semi casual about his safety now that they know he's very durable. They care but they know they have more leeway with him.
As to what I'd love to see, honestly I'd love to see a full tour chapter where Jenna accidentally eats Jake, probably because she was more careless at dinner, and decides when she realizes that she'll just wait til her son comes out the other end.
Jake needs a good week long vacation back inside the woman who gave birth to him
Author's Response:
Noted friend! While I don't know if I'm gonna sacrifice a whole week of story to dedicate to it, full tour was always on the table, though I haven't decided who should send him on his way, I'll keep the idea in mind! Definitely a fan of the idea of "returning to your roots" inside of a giantess mother though, thank you for the kind words as well!
[Report This]Date: December 31 2023 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
Damn some fun nose action already a 10/10 chapter in my opinion.
can’t wait to see what happens next for Jake and when he reunite with his family I’m already see Jenna showering him with endless kisses when he gets back and the rest of the girls when he is safely home.
As for your comment about what we would like to see although not guaranteed I’ll say.
- more of Jade being gross/tomboyish around Jake with any part of her body.
- Skylar wanting to make it up to Jake by using her feet
- Jenna being a clumsy mom with any part of her body.
and that’s mostly it for now for me personally but great work so dude you are killing it with this story
Date: December 30 2023 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a phenomenal story so far. IMO best on the site in a while. Especially when it comes to you describing in such detail the sense of scale and just how small he is. I can’t imagine what it’d be like to experience a fart at that speck of a size! Please keep going and know that everyone is anxiously awaiting the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, the scale is super important to me, and though I don't want to spoil anything, I'll simply say that you may get a detailed description of what a fart is like for someone so small sometime soon! ;)
[Report This]Date: December 30 2023 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
Dude I love Jake as a character so far and his struggle to keep his horney side from his family but that make so hard is probably my favorite part about this situation lol
as for DR Chen she goes super hard core and I love it and her as well
Author's Response:
The struggle is real! I'm glad you like it! And you can already tell, but you'll have plenty more with Dr Chen soon! Thank you for the review!
Date: December 30 2023 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Gonna be honest, the best parts of this story are the ones with Chen.
The slow, methodical approach with actual purpose is amazing.
The family thing feels 'lol, how random' in comparison, even if it's hot in its own way.
Author's Response:
Yeah it feels that way doesn't it? The family side of the story right now is just your classic horny writing, I'm hoping I can make it more impactful as the two worlds get closer together and eventually merge, I'm glad you're enjoying the Chen side though! I'm putting a lot of thought into it! Or trying to anyway!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2023 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love Jade already and she a tomboy too that’s a reason I love her the most and Jenna is a very good mom honestly and the other sister I can’t wait to see more interaction with Jake at his size. The whole Dr Chen plot is so interesting and has me hooked. You are doing great my friend and I’m honestly impressed by the amount of words and details you put in each chapter and in short periods of time. I can’t wait for the next chapter already.
ps - if Jade wants Jake swimming in her burps then I suggest she just put him in her mouth and burp with him inside just saying
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm trying to include a character for everyone, and Jada is definitely my outlet for the rude, gross girl archetype. Swimming in burps will be the least of Jake's worries, though you can definitely expect more from her!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2023 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Amazing story! I love your writing and how you describe the scenes. I hope we get to see Jake lose himself to his sisters' and mom's feet and worship them. Excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I' trying very hard not just immediately jump to that like I might have as a younger writer, but, rest assured, there will be steamy foot action to come!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2023 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
One of the best story’s Iv read in a while, I love it when they are that small. Your writing really paints a picture of how insignificant he is. Look forward to seeing what happens to him :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Smaller sizes are my passion! Look forward to more soon!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2023 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good writing. You do a great job making us feel the scale of size. You leave the chapter always wanting more lol. I can't wait to see where this goes! Added to favorites!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try my best to make it clear how pathetically tiny he is, I'm glad you're enjoying!
Date: December 29 2023 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
i love this story! so hot how small he and how it seems he's becoming a tiny tiny object of no consequence to his sister and Mother, not to mention how sexy it is what dr chen does to him. i hope, hope, hope there is some aware F/m ass stuff in the future! especially with his mom.
Author's Response:
I plan on incorporating all the tags I've added, can't say for sure who all will be involved, but there will definitely be ass play at some point, thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2023 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Can't believe it, double cliffhanger, what a tease. Anyway thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response:
Gotta keep you guys hanging, lol, thank you for five stars! Look forward to more!
Date: December 28 2023 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the swap between the past and present, absolutely amazing story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I hope to keep the swaps going, though I'm not sure it will be indefinite, but thank you for the praise!
Date: December 28 2023 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Very interesting story !
Can't wait to see Jake dropped into the carpet around 5 pairs of stompers (ot more if there are Chen and her assistant involved) !
Author's Response:
Oh there will be some carpet shenanigans no doubt, thank you for the compliments!
[Report This]Date: December 28 2023 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Damn, the way you grappled with the manipulation of Jake, the subtlety of it, and the moment he got anchored, delicately depicted, amazing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I took my time with it and I'm glad it's appreciated!
Date: December 28 2023 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting.
I'll put this one in my list of favorites.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: December 28 2023 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm a picturesque and intricate story written with passion. Great story.
Author's Response:
I'm only getting more passionate about it as I go! Thank you for the kind review!
[Report This]Date: December 28 2023 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is great keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Thank you for the praise! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!