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Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bro this was amazing from Jake little adventure to Chen’s plans for Jake and finally Jada time to shine

im begging for her to do something like Burping, farting and all kinds odor please and thank you 

Reviewer: JchJC27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Can't wait to see Jada have her way with Jake, hopefully we get to see Jake lose control again and give in. The way you write those scenarios with Jake's family is so good, the details of the smells and the huge size difference Jake experiences is so hot. When Jake does shrink again, I hope there's a way for his size to be adjusted still because I find that his family being able to at least see him a little bit makes the scenarios way hotter as opposed to seeing and feeling nothing if Jake becomes microscopic in size. All in all, keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoyed Jada's chapter! And I wouldn't worry too much, I don't have a permanent size in mind for him really, if he does go microscopic, it wouldn't be indefinite! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

Yesss! Jada's actual arc is finally here!!!



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Storyviewer221 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2024 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

I've been reading along with each chapter as it's come out and finally decided to make a review! This is genuinely one of the best stories I've read on this site. You've been updating it so fast and I appreciate it so much. I love the descriptions of the sizes and smells of everything, it's so well done. I've been waiting for this chapter a while, finally alone with Jada! Hope we get some fart content with this one. Whatever happens I can't wait to read it, thank you for writing!

Author's Response:

I hope it was what you imagined! Thank you!

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2024 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

Incredible chapter! Love all the scenarios and where it's headed. I prefer the family interaction most, jumping back to Dr Chen throws off the fluidity a little for me, overall great



Author's Response:

They'll be intersecting soon so I hope that will help a bit for you! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2024 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

And once again another perfect chapter like scoring multiple touchdowns in football you just can’t be stopped with this greatness of a story


first - Jake experience with this new view of the world in his size was awesome and very well detailed so nice job there and him making friends with Antonio was great quickly reminded me of Honey I shrunk the kids but hopefully he survives long 

second - I can wait too see more of Ashley she already has my interest in the story 

and the ending of the chapter got me so hyped overall great job



Author's Response:

Thanks as always for the kind words, I like knowing people are still enjoying the story as it goes along!

Reviewer: goku321 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2024 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

So glad you are back this story is just amazing. With the amount of chapters you are able to crunch out daily, you are really talented. I love the dynamic in the family, the scenarios Jake is put in. Everything is just so good. I'm hooked and always looking forward to new chapters. Also I can not wait for the Jada chapter as its been teased many times in the story so far, I can not wait to see what she makes Jake do with her feet!

Great stuff as always. 

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2024 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

Holy cow I just…. Words can barely describe how good this story is like it’s insane!!!!!!! First of Jake being apart of the love session here was hot as hell and I love Lizzy so much she already my favorite non family character and I can already tell she won’t be the last


second a pool party whaaaaaaaat!!!! Sign me the hell up for this party already 

third noooooo I wanted more Jada moments curse her work life for taking that away from me lol 

lastly Dr.Chen is such a great villain or antagonist in this story like damn she willing to do anything.

overall once again great chapter literal masterpiece 

PS - I kinda hope to see more mouth play with any of the characters, Butt action, and just to be sweet if Jake has to sleep with his mother for a night then she should have him sleep in her bellybutton in my personal opinion but you do you with this amazing story 

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2024 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 3

Let me begin by stating the obvious: your story is amazing! I have yet to catch up with the latest chapters, but I have to say it now: your storytelling is amazing.

As far as I can tell, you are managing to tell a real story around Jake’s size and fetishes. And that is because Jake’s story is not about his lust, but his strugles. His despair after shrinking again… And before that, seeing how Jake lacks space and understanding within the family, his low self esteem, him trying to cause as little trouble as possible… man, that felt real.

Jacob feels like he needs to be accepted inside his own family! As if he was less. Less important to them. Is he? I hope not.

I would like to comment more, but I want to do that when I am all caught up.

Thanks for writing and sharing with us! Your world building reminds me of "Homunculus", a classic from the site. Are you perhaps familiar?

Again: amazing work. Keep it up!!


PS.: Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.



Author's Response:

You seem perfectly fluent to me my friend, and thank you for the kind words. I am doing my best to both tell a story for those who want it, and include the stuff for people who just want the fun steamy moments, so I'm glad to hear that you're appreciative of that. As for 'Homunculus' by Cayce, yes I have, it is one of my main inspirations as well as the first story I read on here when I was well below the age I should have been when interacting with the site and community (haha). Thank you for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy what I have planned!

Reviewer: JchJC27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2024 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my goodness, this chapter was steamy and absolutely phenomenal. With how you wrote the Jake segment, I am hoping we get to see his other family members tag team Jake with their feet, maybe even all 5 at once although that may break Jake's mind lol. Like the other reviewers have said, I have been checking regularly for any updates. Your work has to be one of my favorite giantess stories I've read so far. 

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2024 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

Good lord! First half was soooooo freaking good!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2024 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 14

Okay that was very intense chapter first off nice job to Lizzy and Skylar for helping Jake with his reward. The Nine plot is getting really interesting and I can’t wait to see Jake and him meet again another great chapter dude 👍

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2024 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love that this has more focus on the siblings. Keep it up! I wish there was a version of this series focusing only on Jake and his sisters. I find Chen's parts hot too but those scenarios with Nicky and Skylar were way hotter!

Btw, are you planning on posting this series on your DA too?

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm sorry you don't enjoy the Chen/Innomed side of things though, as for DA, I might, I'm not sure how well the site would support a large story, wasn't aware people did much reading there?

Reviewer: JchJC27 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2024 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

Another amazing chapter! I enjoyed the development between Skylar and Lizzie, can't wait to see Jake get his reward from Skylar's feet. Also was not expecting that Dr. Chen plan. I do hope we get to see Jake have steamy feet moments with Jenna and his other sisters before he falls into the clutches of Dr. Chen again though. Keep up the great work. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! No spoilers here, but, Chens arrival will not be the end of the family moments, so no worries there!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2024 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

Holy smokes I was not expecting that to happen but I love it regardless and the revel of Dr.Cher’s plan was crazy good bro I can’t stress this enough but you are amazing like straight up you might become the best author on the site at this rate 



Author's Response:

You're very generous man, thank you, I think I'm quite a ways off, there are some really good stories and writers present here, but if I'm happy if you count me as one of your favorites!

Reviewer: loom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2024 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just wanted to say I've followed you on Deviantart for a while, and had no idea you could write this well. Awesome story. Can't wait for the rest!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah I don't get the opportunity to write a whole bunch there, stuff needs to be condensed down into a single image for the most part, glad you like it!

Reviewer: mattgrecs Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2024 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

One of the first stories in a long time that I’ve actually been checking the site throughout the day to see if there is an update it’s that good from the writing to the pacing

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm trying to keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2024 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

Damn Jake about to live his wildest fantasy lol I Already love Lizzy and Skylar tag teaming to give Jake a reward for his struggles and Jake being the semi chad for standing up to Dr. Chen was awesome. 

Also how do you pump out this chapters so fast it’s unreal how fast this chapter comes out 

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2024 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

Omg I love Lizzy so much she already a favorite of my after this chapter just beautiful work dude 

Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2024 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm still at chapter 8, my suggestion is to shrink him more than 1/8 inch, and the story inevitably goes on as an unaware one (maybe they think, or they are being told that their brother is at the lab). Maybe suggested scene could be an ant walking on the floor, 3 times bigger than him, crushed by one of the sisters, he end up between her toes and survived. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the suggestion, while I don't plan on the story shifting entirely into unaware, there will be unaware and possible bug crush involved!

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