[Report This]Date: January 19 2024 2:56 PM Title: God Brad
Great chapter and the story has been amazing so far
Now I think the best gods are Melissa, Alex, Hailee and Brad so far
and the god I would worship is probably Melissa and close second Hailee
Author's Response:
Team Melissa, all the way :)
Date: January 14 2024 6:39 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
Somehow I get the impression that Alexandra knows every single person that she steps on, and that each and every one of them deserves it in some way. It wouldn't surprise me if deserving people somehow manage to not be crushed during her rampages. Just my thought on the topic of her. I think she is hiding her purposeful destructive nature just to generate the fear/worship from everyone else.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2024 9:20 PM Title: Goddess Melissa
The soul-ownership aspect is really interesting. If a goddess eats someone, do they get their soul regardless of who they worshipped? How does Carlos feel about knowing he’ll be owned by his mom when he dies (or will he, if he doesn’t worship her)? Will Hailee make amends with Grace and convince her she won’t be subject to eternal damnation? Alexandra seems like a bit of a hypocrite - does she give her victims a pleasant afterlife? Great work so far!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for your comment! You raised a lot of though-provoking questions.
In my documents folder, I have 5 pages of lore, world building, and rules that define the universe in this story. I’ve written everything about souls, the afterlife, religion, and politics across these pages and use it as my bible (heh) when I write the story. I also have an explanation of the start of the universe and the who, what, where, and why these four gods are (seemingly) out of nowhere become gods. In other words, I theory-crafted the ever living shit out of this universe before I uploaded the first chapter.
Because I’m one of those, show don’t tell writers I won’t be answering your questions here. You can always DM me on discord if you want to speak privately, and I’ll give you the low-down if you don’t mind spoilers. But I recommend sitting back for the ride. Because it’s gonna get good.
Date: January 13 2024 6:35 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
Really enjoying the new story! However don't forget about Lilliput!
Both are great, I am just a huge fan of Lilliput and hope you won't stop on that one.
Author's Response:
Haha, I haven’t forgotten about Lilliput. Imma finish up the next chapter of this story and then hop back on Lilliput. This has been a nice mental break from the near-constant writing I’ve been doing since last September.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2024 6:19 AM Title: Goddess Alexandra
Funny how the only god whose toenail color we never found out was Alexandra who's the one using her feet lol
I wonder how many gods there are. I'm also curious to imagine what Alexandra's afterlife is like.
I imagine she was more so upset they were blaming her for doing bad things rather than them doing bad things in the first place. Tho, I believe it's implied she may have been poor before she became a god.
Author's Response:
I legit didn’t know I was describing each goddess’s toenails until you brought it up. I guess that was a foul for not describing Alexandra—and she’s the one that would smite an author for not showing her due respect.
There are four gods. 3 Goddesses and 1 God.
Alexandra is a complex character, and there’s a lot going through her mind that drives her actions. Her background (pre-ascension) and her newfound powers amplify her behavior and thought process. There’s a lot going on, and I can’t wait to write her next chapter.
Date: January 08 2024 2:12 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
Great addition, 2 down 2 to go. Hopefully the next goddess. It's a little bit more sexy.
Author's Response:
I think you'll like Goddess Alexandra in that case, lol. Thank you for your continued support.
Date: January 07 2024 6:43 PM Title: Goddess Melissa
Ill always be a fan of busty mega milfs. Cant wait to see what you have planned for this story.
Author's Response: Not only is she a mega MILF, she's a goddess in charge of all gods. She's a great character :)
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 4:14 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
I love this story. Hopefully it continues.
Date: December 25 2023 3:49 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
This is fantastic. I absolutely love the premise. A woman attaining power but still navigating elements of her normal life.
I love Melissa. Hopefully I love the other gods just as much. Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I hope you like the others too. I'm putting a lot of work into each god so that they feel real.