[Report This]Date: May 03 2024 3:23 PM Title: Goddess Melissa
Awesome to see this story back !
Great chapter too, I loved the powerplay between Emma and the gods, I found it creative and hot !
I was also nice on character developement and plot, you tease very well the impending threat looming over Earth and the gods
I hope Emma will be a reccuring character, I like her so much !
Author's Response:
Hehe. I'm sure you've read the latest. Emma is gonna have a bigger role in the story ;)
Date: April 08 2024 11:31 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
Finished the last chapter. Really feeling bad for everyone here lmao Vanessa Melissa and carlito.
also it seems the demons where behind Brad and Alexandra’s fling on top of the city? It kinda makes sense since Alexandra seems decent behind her facade and Brad is a pretty chill and humble guy
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments! Yes, the demons certainly influenced Brad and Alex. And yeah, Carlito got the shaft in this chapter.
Date: April 08 2024 9:21 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
Gotta say kinda refreshing to read a story where the gods actually care about mortals . Well at least Melissa and haliee do from where am at in the story
really enjoying it so far
[Report This]Date: January 27 2024 7:52 PM Title: Goddess Melissa
Reading your response to my review, I think I may have misspoke about Hailee. When I said she was acting out of character, I didn't mean that in the literal sense. Like you said, I also thought that was very much in character for her, as I view her as the most "human" of the gods (although Brad is catching up real quick).
What I meant by that was that she was acting out of character in the sense that her behavior toward Jay and Grace doesn't align with how she normally acts. By her being the most "human," I meant that she seems like the most legit person out if the gods. I think she genuinely likes to help people and sees her power as I way to do that rather than a reason to think of herself as above her worshippers (at least to the extent that a god can feel that way).
But when it comes to Jay, it's different. Despite how good a person she is, live and jealousy make her do things that she normally would never consider. Maybe I should have just referenced the old cliché "Love makes you crazy" instead of saying out of character.
Your comments on Melissa have piqued my interest. Maybe I've misjudged her a bit. I'm eager to see what you guys have planned for her.
And as far as the summary goes, I can see where you're coming from, and what you guys wrote dies clarify that this goes beyond smut. I just felt like you may have given away a major plot twist before the story even started. Focusing on these people trying to be gods for a while only to have an intergalactic threat show up out of nowhere is something I wouldn't have seen coming without that heads up. But there are things more important to a story than a shocking twist, so it's really just a matter of priorities more than anything. So if the summary you guys put up does what you want it to, don't worry too much about what I said.
Author's Response:
Yeah Hailee is interesting in that she means well but she has trouble with her emotions. She portrays some of the cons that comes with being a god as shown with the complication with Jay. More will definitely be explored with her as the story progresses.
Melissa has her flaws but ultimately she still has that motherly vibe that simply makes her want to take the responsibility of keeping her “children” safe and secure and in her recent chapter we wanted to touch on her human like qualities and her relationship with her husband and son.
Thanks again for the continued support and detailed comments. we always appreciate the level of time and dedication a fan takes into our story. Means a lot!
Date: January 14 2024 6:39 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
Somehow I get the impression that Alexandra knows every single person that she steps on, and that each and every one of them deserves it in some way. It wouldn't surprise me if deserving people somehow manage to not be crushed during her rampages. Just my thought on the topic of her. I think she is hiding her purposeful destructive nature just to generate the fear/worship from everyone else.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2024 9:20 PM Title: Goddess Melissa
The soul-ownership aspect is really interesting. If a goddess eats someone, do they get their soul regardless of who they worshipped? How does Carlos feel about knowing he’ll be owned by his mom when he dies (or will he, if he doesn’t worship her)? Will Hailee make amends with Grace and convince her she won’t be subject to eternal damnation? Alexandra seems like a bit of a hypocrite - does she give her victims a pleasant afterlife? Great work so far!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for your comment! You raised a lot of though-provoking questions.
In my documents folder, I have 5 pages of lore, world building, and rules that define the universe in this story. I’ve written everything about souls, the afterlife, religion, and politics across these pages and use it as my bible (heh) when I write the story. I also have an explanation of the start of the universe and the who, what, where, and why these four gods are (seemingly) out of nowhere become gods. In other words, I theory-crafted the ever living shit out of this universe before I uploaded the first chapter.
Because I’m one of those, show don’t tell writers I won’t be answering your questions here. You can always DM me on discord if you want to speak privately, and I’ll give you the low-down if you don’t mind spoilers. But I recommend sitting back for the ride. Because it’s gonna get good.
Date: January 13 2024 6:35 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
Really enjoying the new story! However don't forget about Lilliput!
Both are great, I am just a huge fan of Lilliput and hope you won't stop on that one.
Author's Response:
Haha, I haven’t forgotten about Lilliput. Imma finish up the next chapter of this story and then hop back on Lilliput. This has been a nice mental break from the near-constant writing I’ve been doing since last September.
Date: January 08 2024 2:12 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
Great addition, 2 down 2 to go. Hopefully the next goddess. It's a little bit more sexy.
Author's Response:
I think you'll like Goddess Alexandra in that case, lol. Thank you for your continued support.
Date: January 07 2024 6:43 PM Title: Goddess Melissa
Ill always be a fan of busty mega milfs. Cant wait to see what you have planned for this story.
Author's Response: Not only is she a mega MILF, she's a goddess in charge of all gods. She's a great character :)
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 4:14 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
I love this story. Hopefully it continues.
Date: December 25 2023 3:49 AM Title: Goddess Melissa
This is fantastic. I absolutely love the premise. A woman attaining power but still navigating elements of her normal life.
I love Melissa. Hopefully I love the other gods just as much. Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I hope you like the others too. I'm putting a lot of work into each god so that they feel real.