[Report This]Date: May 14 2024 6:50 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Absolutely love the story, one of my all time favourites already!
As for ideas: Maybe Hannah isn't satisfied that her breasts aren't growing fast enough, so she and Jess finds some kind of remedy to speed things up? Thus adding a kind of chemical/non-magic element to the story? This being kept discreetly hidden from the reader of course, but hinted at through clever writing, like you have been really good at so far!
No idea if that is a direction you've thought about exploring, but plot twists are in my opinion always important in expansion stories. Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses, good luck!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2024 4:33 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
One of my favorite active stories!
After the end of chapter 6, I'm curious how much of the dream sequence from the end of chapter 5 will come true...
I love the interactions between Sam and Nate. It seems like Sam is getting a bit disillusioned with her boyfriends, so hopefully they'll be able to make up. And if they do, I wonder if Sam or Sam's sister will have an interest in the hypnosis treatments (a twin sister outgrowing her twin brother is always interesting to me).
I also enjoy Nate and Hannah's relationship. It feels like it has come so far, but yet has oh so far to go!
Awesome writing - keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad you like it.
I plan to keep the character's sizes close to realistic in this story (so Nate will never be held in the palm of someone's hand, for example), but other than that restriction, who knows?
Sam and the twins will return soon, so I hope you look forward to it.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2024 1:05 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
This story is incredible! Do you have an idea of when you will post the next chapter?
Thanks again I have really enjoyed this !
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far.
Unfortunately, I'm still not sure when I'll be able to update it. I've written about half of it, but the second half should come faster.
Maybe a couple of weeks. Although I've said that before and been wrong, lol.
Date: February 18 2024 2:36 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
First, I'm really liking this story! Big fan of giantess little siscest.
As far as the story goes, SPOILERS
I'm glad Hannah is expressing sexual interest in him/enjoying soft domning him. From how you've written it, the dummy has realized she kinda fucked him for life with her little hypnosis thing. My hope is she started teasing him out of pity/because it was funny and it's evolved into her actually having some feelings toward him. That's me.
I'll be the bad person and say I don't want Sam and Nate to reconcile. I like that downer moment, hopefully with him getting some good closure. I think you did a good job with Kerry, with hopefully a followup on what you put at the end of her section.
That's what I'd recommend, at least. You seemed to imply Kerry was done etc. But if I may, I think that and where I think it may be going might be a mistake? Or at least less ambitious? Kerry basically being ruined for other men by having experienced her fetish with Nate is awesome, as is her having to basically learn to be nice in order to get with him. It'd even be funny for a bigger Hannah to disapprove of her cause she's not good enough for Nate.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
The end of the next chapter will really get into Hannah's feelings and motivations. I've been kinda limited so far due to Nate being the POV character. Hopefully, I'll stick the landing there. 😅
I don't have anything further planned with Kerry, but honestly, I don't have much planned at all past the end of the next chapter, lol. I am definitely going to continue the story, it's not even close to being done, but I don't know what shape it will take yet. That said, Kerry is really fun to write, so giving her more to do in later chapters sounds good to me. 😀👍
[Report This]Date: February 15 2024 4:40 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Nice story! I like how it is progressing
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll do my best to stick the landing too.
Date: February 15 2024 3:03 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Personally, I hope that the pacing of the story will increase some more so we can read more about characters growing over the years while Nate stays the same.
I really like Hannah and I want her to grow even faster!
Like, maybe Hannah starts growing like crazy once she hits puberty, so her parents send her to a special clinic for about a year to be studied. However, the doctors do not find any abnormalities and once she comes home Nate is shocked to find that his sister has become the tallest in the family at over 7 feet tall!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Chapters 4 and 5 were supposed to be just one but the basketball/Kerry storyline grew too big. So the pace should be more like 6 months per chapter. But I am getting pretty close to the grand reveal, and things might speed up after that.
Date: January 03 2024 7:26 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
So I just read all three stories. I just see a good young man's wife being destroyed by jealous little sister. I like to think that she tries to fix some of it. But I don't see things turn out well for him. Looks to me like things are going to go down a dark hole for him. it'd be one thing puberty did maybe let them grow in other areas become swimmer fit. and maybe his genital getting bigger so he can satisfy taller girls. I don't know if I'll keep reading this I'm type of guy that likes a happy ending. don't get me wrong I like to see the trials that people have to go through to get to a happy ending but.
But hey this is your story you write the story you want to write you can't make everyone happy.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. The end of chapter 3 and the first part of chapter 4 is a pretty low point for the protag. I do plan on a happy ending but I understand if it's not enough/taking too long for you.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 6:51 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Love it. definitely will keep my eye out for updates
Author's Response:
Thanks! I have one more chapter in my backlog that will be posted on Jan. 2nd. After that updates will slow down, but they will keep coming.
Date: December 20 2023 1:38 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
I read all three chapters on your AO3. And man, I really like your story! Chapter 2 is my absolute favorite right now, and that ending still give me shivers. This first attempt of yours is incredible in my opinion! Don't lose ispiration 'cause this is really intriguing. The couple Hannah and Jess are my favorites hands down. Please keep it up! It's been awhile since i read something like this, and i missed it so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the kind words. Wow! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'll keep writing the best story I can. New chapters won't come very quickly, but I promise I won't stop until the story is done.