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Reviewer: littless Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2024 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Deadender's Tale

I like this -- the roles, the sizes and the conversation between Gwen and Ian. The only thing I don't like is the time between chapters. Oh, please hurry and publish another chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the compliment. This is my first long story and I'm trying to set up a reasonable schedule for release sections. It's been challenging.

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