Date: August 17 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tormenting Tim
The hawk is Tim ticket out of there. Pehaps the hawk should take him to a new home with a different character(s) but I see you have already written the next chapter so it'll be interesting to see.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2009 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tormenting Tim
Hi Pamela, I enjoyed this story very much.
I like how creative Pamela is in tormenting and humiliating helpless Tim.
It is really pity the hawk took him. I was hoping the story would continue. Please, save his life and let him drop back into the pool :)
I personally would prefer if there is not any other shrunk woman or man. She could turn him into her small personal servant performing various tasks for her amusement. She would laugh and humiliate him even more. She would deny his orgasms and lock his penis into a chastity belt. He would be very horny but would not be able to have an orgasm until she unlocks the chastity device. And this would be very rarely (once per couple of weeks) after his good performance and his orgasms would be always very humiliating. (then he would go back into the chastity belt) On the other hand Pamela would not restrict herself. Tim would be her sex-toy whenever / wherever / however available for her lust.
Maybe Pamela's mother could come to visit ... as her daughter she would be a natural dome and would enjoy Tim too.Pamela, many thanks for the great story and have nice day.
Author's Response: The reason I haven't written more yet is because I can't decide what to do next! SO many options! But stay tuned. And thanks for your kind words of encouragement.
Date: November 30 2009 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tormenting Tim
Is she likely to eat him?
Author's Response: Eat him, huh? Well, I hadn't thought of that. But I am thinking of having the hawk drop him back into the pool as he attempts to pick up another creature on the pool deck...perhaps Tim's sister. What do you think?